Author's Name: Emily Honigsfeld
Category: YA
Genre: Fantasy
Stage of Completion: WIP. I’m planning to have a first draft completed in
September!
Preferred Critique Style: Somewhere between all the flails and straight to the point.
I appreciate brutal honesty, with some tangents and love sprinkled in. It’s
what you’ll get from me.
Cat Person or Dog Person: Dog. Although, most of my friends are cat. So, cat-curious?
Tea or Coffee: Iced coffee. Nothing too frou.
Short Pitch
Larka is no helpless maiden, she’s a
soot-stained heathen raised by convicts. Through a series of unfortunate
circumstances, she’s given a bath and an offer: freedom for her enslaved
convict brothers if she wins the annual contest of Kingsmaiden, consort to the
king for a year. So she slips on her first dress, locks away her heart and
makes the decision to win at all costs. During her ladylike training, Larka
uncovers a dark, magical truth behind the title and the terrible price each
victor pays. Soon, she must decide between freeing her brothers and ending the
contest for good.
Writing Sample
On
the eve of a brutal storm, a cry was heard outside a House of Convicts. Curious
men with little left to fear opened the door to find a strange baby girl with
dark hair and emerald eyes. She was swaddled in the ghost-white hide of fenrir
wolf, sucking on bark carved with the rune of a meadowlark.
The
convicts knew no one else would take in such a strange child, so they decided
to keep the babe, naming her Larka after the rune. There, in the town of Nifl,
in the far reaches of the outer Heath, the men raised the girl in secret,
breaking the last law they ever thought they would–they all loved her.
Years
passed. The secret held. No one discovered the girl, for the men of the House
of Convicts were skilled at breaking laws.
Chapter 1
Two
identical knives sit before me. One is dull and couldn’t gut a fish, while the
other was just hilt-deep in some fool's belly. I almost didn’t get away this
time. Almost. My fingers wobble as I snatch up the dull knife, catching a
glimpse of my grimey face in the reflective surface near the hilt. The sight is
enough to make anyone wince. I smile. Looks matter little on the Heath. I’m
only alive because the man attempted to steal my loaf of bread by pressing that
dull knife to my neck, never expecting to see a sharpened knife appear
next to it, nor a girl trained to spot the difference.
I want to hear more! My own story isn't like this at all, but this is the kind of thing I read a lot when I was younger. I'm under "dreamscape". If you are interested in working together, message me at mandy001@cogeco.ca
ReplyDeleteHi Emily! I like this concept; reminds me of An Ember in the Ashes. I'd be interested in swapping chapters if you are! I'm Lyla, and mine is the untitled fantasy (contemporary w/dragons... the contemporary is a departure for me, I have a more classic fantasy on deck being plotted). Since I juuust finished the draft, I feel like we're in a similar point in the process and might be a good fit. If you're interested, let me know! My email is llawless (at) terpmail (dot) umd (dot) edu.
ReplyDeleteHi Emily! Your story sounds amazing and I love a great FMC (pretty sure Larka is one!!). Also, iced coffee is the bomb. Eeeeven though I didn't enter PW this year, I'm always looking for CPs. I won the Red Light/Green Light contest on this blog (http://www.adventuresinyapublishing.com/2016/07/red-lightgreen-light-final-winner.html#.V79VKBRqcdd) (writing samples are linked in there). if you're interested in being a CP/fraand, please email me at lmyhrwrites AT gmail DOT come. Thanks!! - Lindsey
ReplyDeleteHey Emily.
ReplyDeleteI think we could be a fit. Liking your concept. My work is the one named Eden, YA SF. If you're interested, send your first chapter and query to HCarpenter2@yahoo.com and we can see from there.
Heather.
Hi Emily! I didn't submit my current WIP for this match up because it's too close to the beginning stages but it will be a YA fantasy. I've just read your submission, though, and am absolutely entranced by the concept and your writing. I'd love to have an opportunity to read a sample and see if my critiquing fits for you...and I should have a decent sample within a few weeks as well. Email me if you are at all interested - jawardwrites (at) gmail (dot) com
ReplyDeleteEither way, good luck with your story...it sounds amazing!! :)
Hi Emily! I didn't submit my current WIP for this match up because it's too close to the beginning stages but it will be a YA fantasy. I've just read your submission, though, and am absolutely entranced by the concept and your writing. I'd love to have an opportunity to read a sample and see if my critiquing fits for you...and I should have a decent sample within a few weeks as well. Email me if you are at all interested - jawardwrites (at) gmail (dot) com
ReplyDeleteEither way, good luck with your story...it sounds amazing!! :)
Emily: love it. Love your pitch, the prologue, the chapter excerpt. I write MG and YA. Let's exchange chapters! lisamgold@gmail.com
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