tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post7140353792673007013..comments2023-06-24T08:30:59.493-04:00Comments on Adventures in YA Contests from: Entry # 22: CAMP CAMMOODLEMartina Boonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03358736828122139189noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post-85256150511357893922014-03-03T21:00:21.739-05:002014-03-03T21:00:21.739-05:00Word count 25,500Word count 25,500Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16464315494648871114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post-37482831707926900732014-03-03T14:36:19.654-05:002014-03-03T14:36:19.654-05:00Format Issue: No double spaces between sentences a...Format Issue: No double spaces between sentences anymore. Single space. Paragraphing incorrect in First Page. Question about Pitch: Will the whole arc build to the moment TG must be saved? First Page: I would have been more engaged if there had been a scene between Larry and his mom. This a great opportunity to reveal both characters. AYAP Judge 1https://www.blogger.com/profile/16182849395867360908noreply@blogger.com