tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post682268896535276581..comments2023-06-24T08:30:59.493-04:00Comments on Adventures in YA Contests from: Entry #15: THE DAY THE ZOO BROKE LOOSEMartina Boonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03358736828122139189noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post-78381716900831452792014-08-29T21:16:40.352-04:002014-08-29T21:16:40.352-04:00Very cute beginning. I can tell that Oliver and Sa...Very cute beginning. I can tell that Oliver and Sarka will get into mischief throughout the story. I was kind of confused by the setting in the first chapter, however. At first I thought they were looking at a real dinosaur, and when I learned this was a museum, I wasn't sure how the two children could climb the skeleton without a guard intervening.<br /><br />Good luck!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post-533732571486826462014-08-29T18:16:33.527-04:002014-08-29T18:16:33.527-04:00This made me smile:
"What do you think you&...This made me smile:<br /><br /> "What do you think you're doing?" his mom asked.<br />"Science?" he said, hoping it was the right choice.<br /><br />I really liked how the children play off of each other to get up to mischief, it seems like it'll be a lot of fun to read about what they get up to. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14820659522541825744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post-40107127349693593592014-08-28T20:13:11.752-04:002014-08-28T20:13:11.752-04:00These seem like really fun characters! I can just ...These seem like really fun characters! I can just imagine the trouble Sarka and Oliver will get in at the zoo. I am a bit curious about their ages. I'd guess younger elementary from their voices. This is one I'd have liked to see the pitch for, too. Best of luck to you!Laurie Dennisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01089552813955890768noreply@blogger.com