tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post4374056968830386653..comments2023-06-24T08:30:59.493-04:00Comments on Adventures in YA Contests from: Entry #8: HATCHLINGMartina Boonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03358736828122139189noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post-78216397132172659992014-08-29T19:03:36.653-04:002014-08-29T19:03:36.653-04:00The dialog here is really well done. I have to say...The dialog here is really well done. I have to say - noticing the Urban Fantasy tag and given the title, I have to wonder what other transformations are coming in Maya's life! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14820659522541825744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post-80256662244358558692014-08-29T00:33:12.169-04:002014-08-29T00:33:12.169-04:00Yes! Awesome material to work with (there needs to...Yes! Awesome material to work with (there needs to be more period recognition out there). I think the voice and writing is good, but towards the end you sort of bog the story down with details. Not too much, but enough that I slowed down from the earlier flow (pun fully intended).<br /><br />Good luck!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post-35710925693203725082014-08-27T20:13:58.662-04:002014-08-27T20:13:58.662-04:00I LOVE the chapter title and the voice! What a wil...I LOVE the chapter title and the voice! What a wild place for a book to start. The characters are so engaging, and I connected with Maya right away. Well done!Laurie Dennisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01089552813955890768noreply@blogger.com