tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post1838843523170142608..comments2023-06-24T08:30:59.493-04:00Comments on Adventures in YA Contests from: Adult Contemporary Romance: BEST LAID PLANS IN SCOTLANDMartina Boonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03358736828122139189noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post-21579267859145066082016-08-28T15:43:08.078-04:002016-08-28T15:43:08.078-04:00Lisa I like your pitch. I too write full drafts th...Lisa I like your pitch. I too write full drafts then revise. I am just getting into gif's but find them to be apt and hilarious. I would love to swap chapters and see if we are a match. Oh and I was a cheerleader in high school and still have a few good moves. No splits though, I am to old for that! <br /><br />Kristi Radford <br />Kristirad4d@gmail.comAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00978817051125819892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post-51036691792406860252016-08-26T22:07:19.334-04:002016-08-26T22:07:19.334-04:00Hi Lisa - I'd be interested in seeing if we ma...Hi Lisa - I'd be interested in seeing if we make a good fit. I write contemporary romance, with some suspense & humour. I'm working on pacing & upping the sexy times. I'm pretty good with dialogue & characters & definitely cheerleading! <br />We can chat over pina coladas if you like :) <br />@jemifraserJemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post-27372971543701272862016-08-26T20:42:08.747-04:002016-08-26T20:42:08.747-04:00Alas, I am a cat person (mostly by circumstance), ...Alas, I am a cat person (mostly by circumstance), but I do love me some coffee and the rest of your post and sample. I only just discovered this event but if you'd like to touch base on Twitter @kitforbeswrites I can direct you to a sample of mine.Kit Forbeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142293186810525377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5090356376347540893.post-4278376957811432312016-08-25T21:40:53.987-04:002016-08-25T21:40:53.987-04:00Lisa,
I've seen you some on Twitter so I pull...Lisa,<br /><br />I've seen you some on Twitter so I pulled up your sample to read. I'm not sure that I am the CP for you as I am not much of one for romance stories. But yours looks funny. And I love funny so I read it twice.<br /><br />I kept going back to the first sentence. I think it starts great so I read it multiple times trying to put a punch onto its end feeling it needed something to match how well the rest of the sample begins. How about: "Marie never considered herself a complete and utter moron no matter how many times other people said it."<br /><br />Just a random thought.<br /><br />Regards.<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01410815650908621090noreply@blogger.com